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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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AI Interpretation
Addressed to Penny and Steve, this grateful letter-poem honors their steadiness, hospitality, and practical goodness, ending with a handwritten `Always` / `Love` sign-off.
The tone is affectionate and unusually settled. Instead of inner conflict, the page gives thanks for decency that proved itself over time, with the handwritten closing making the gratitude feel personal.
A letter-poem of gratitude that sets the addressees against the speaker's own life: 'With the considerable trouble in my life; / no trouble about you and yours'. Penny and Steve are praised for plain, durable decency - the 'hapless and promising' they 'took in,; put up, and showed direction' - measured across years from 'early sixty / seven' to the 'Mc Kens / River home'. The closing similes turn thanks tactile and frontier-tinged ('Like walking toward a kiss', 'buck skin', 'a lance') before the handwritten 'Always' / 'Love' makes the gratitude personal rather than rhetorical.