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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This draft of 'The Moment' moves from intoxicated perception and a refusal to listen toward Adamic myth, bragged power, destitution, and the collapse of love into addiction.
The corrected text shows a rough but coherent meditation on withdrawal and disassembly. The visible correction marks matter as manuscript evidence, while the typed poem itself keeps circling truth, isolation, and dependency.
The Moment — first pass. Simposium of time, walking off and gone as well. Don't stoop an ear or show your window tongue. Seeing is simple when stoned — it leaves. Adam swallowed it instead. Destitute as a drum beat that has sank. It's not the bitch or bastard you're coming from when you're dying from love and addiction.