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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The poem is socially rough and darkly comic, warning the young that age and ordinary domestic life can tear the heart open as surely as public insult.
The scan-supported final insertion, 'Just Leave cheating alone,' makes the closing feel like a blunt marginal command. The collision of coarse language, domestic imagery, and private warning is the page's main pressure.
'Social' is a coarse, darkly comic warning to the young. It ranks insults - better 'a rat's ass, or skin a cat / Then to be called two ends / against the middle' - and counsels caution: 'Watch your self young: / that know your good of heart'. Its bleak claim is that domestic ordinariness wounds as surely as public insult: 'The older you get the more / open doorknobs tear you apart', whether you 'listen to the stars / in an alley way' or step 'outside / a split level home'. The handwritten 'Just' turns the final typed line into a blunt command: 'Just Leave cheating alone'.