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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This poem circles event, death, repetition, and memory until trouble stops being a cover-up or gloss and becomes pure loss.
The repeated lines matter. They make the page feel trapped inside the same damaged sequence it is trying to understand, while the handwritten `No gloss` sharpens the refusal of explanation.
'Trouble' enacts its own theme through repetition: the doubled lines 'About what had never happened before' and 'How could I do the same thing over' make the page stammer, so that the form repeats the very repetition it interrogates. The speaker disclaims foresight - 'I did not think twice / I did not think once' - and resists easy explanation, refusing to treat death as 'a concurance' or a 'lapse of memory.' The kept spelling 'concurance' and the handwritten insert 'No gloss' both reject smoothing-over; the bare final rhyme 'No gloss / Now this is loss' lands the poem on grief with no varnish.