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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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AI Interpretation
Ice, desert, mountains, lakes, railroad tracks, flowers, junk, freedom, silence, sorrow, and gain all pound together, making the soul feel like terrain crossed by difficult motion.
The verified page keeps the poem's rough spellings and pressure intact. Its emotional force comes from contradictory landscapes and from the repeated sense of being crossed, stopped, and finished.
The Pounding Soul. Pounding the soul; or ice, desolute (sic). Blamed in the hot desert, shunned wildly against the slope. I see her as a railroad track, any flower against the rail. Growing the bad good. Wild eyes, junk in the sock, the freedom that crosses you. Silence sought with sorrow as well as with the gain that says it is done.