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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
"Sir, Welcome" addresses someone across distance, sea, friendship, and danger, with handwritten edits adding beneath-ness, looking for trouble, and the reminder that a sailor is not.
The handwriting makes the page feel actively revised rather than merely typed. Its welcome is unstable: affectionate, worried, and full of nautical self-questioning, with the final handwritten sailor note leaving the thought deliberately unresolved.
'Sir, Welcome' is an affectionate, anxious address to a seafaring friend, the typed lines widely spaced and threaded with handwritten edits such as 'AND BENEATH,' 'with wife &,' and 'WENT Looking for.' It opens haltingly - 'Thanks; it is hard for me,, my mind seeing / courage out there, in the beyond of the sea' - and pictures the friend 'out there in another place / Keeping things sound.' Memory warms it: 'I remember laughter in the South Seas / in the old days when we WENT Looking for trouble,' set against present dread: 'I wait in horror for the ends of your adventure.' The friend is framed pictorially - 'like a painting from the eighteen hundreds,, / and proud and illistrative' - and the close pleads 'Not to many more times please, / and be careful,' trailing into the broken handwritten 'AS / A Sailor is / not' that leaves the thought unresolved. This reading stays provisional: the page is mixed quality band with reviewed-with-handwriting-ambiguity, and crossed-out marks plus a large flourish were left untranscribed. Kept spelling 'illistrative' is preserved.