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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The page addresses beauty, queenship, locked-up hurt, princely speech, haystack birth imagery, luck, and the handwritten claim that flesh and bone are part of the same declaration.
The corrected text makes the emotional hierarchy clearer: the beloved is queen, origin, and burden. The handwritten ending pulls the page back into bodily material after its elevated language of beauty and birth.
A page addressed to a Queen-like figure. Did my best to do everything, and you are the best I have ever seen. Only love could share decisions about your beauty. Sight is your horror — the disengaged advice you lend. As a Prince I speak from the drunken bar. From the window, from the haystack — you are the birth that has given us birth. The hand-scrawled last line about spit is nearly erased.