By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
"In all my life" joins domestic memory, feeling better, the mother's table, Laurarm, crossed wind, place, blood, and wind.
The corrected transcript makes the page feel like a short elemental memory. The domestic scene is intimate, but the repeated wind crossing the speaker turns that memory into something mobile and bodily.
Under 'In all my life', a domestic memory of 'siting at your Mom's / table eating to the end / and diging Laurarm' opens into an elemental refrain: 'the wind / And how it is crossed / And how it crosses you / No matter where you are', closing on 'Blood and wind'. Intimate scene gives way to something mobile and bodily.