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By Jack Joseph Smith

Keeping Your Mouth Shut A chance at vision Let it come to you When you do it you won't quit on any terms All these days it was there and you iginored it The questions, the abstractions, the absolutes Wild as a boxer's skill, to fend them off The tips of the mountains I took To fend them off Still entitled as art,, like native thread You do not stop what you have seen Independant as dance There are no comparisions with being alone

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GPT

This variant of 'Keeping Your Mouth Shut' expands the vision lesson through ignored days, abstractions, a boxer's skill, mountain tips, art, native thread, and dance.

The repeated draft sharpens the governing instruction rather than merely duplicating it. Vision has to be defended against abstraction, and solitude becomes part of that defense.

Claude

'''Second pass of 'Keeping Your Mouth Shut' with the mountain-tip imagery reintroduced and 'Independant as dance' given its own breath. The draft trajectory shows the author pushing toward concision.'''