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By Jack Joseph Smith

Top Of The Line. We do not think about the middle We are concerned with the beginning and the ending Would it not be strange how pleased I would be with my young death And when I am done with the bottom of the sea and look like I am in the middle then I will be scared Yes let us see when we come up; I guess when we come back, family Let us go and tack the jib, climb the crows nest, be happy with the helm Above the sea To love The best yoy can say Speaking highly of one another

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GPT

'Top Of The Line.' imagines life as a voyage defined by beginnings, endings, young death, sea-bottom fear, return, family, love, and praise.

The sea language gives the page a literal voyage, but it also feels existential. The restored handwritten insertions make family and love central to the ascent rather than decorative afterthoughts.

Claude

Titled 'Top Of The Line.', life becomes a sea voyage attentive only to 'the beginning / and the ending', toying with 'my young death' and the fear of the 'bottom / of the sea', then resolving upward through handwritten insertions toward 'family', 'Above the sea', and 'To love'. This reading remains provisional because the page transcript is partial/OCR-uncertain.