Page 273
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
'Top of The line' imagines speech across distance as a bond stronger than closeness, then adds a handwritten descent into fear at sea.
The typed poem is restrained and philosophical, valuing separation as an unusual knowledge. The handwritten bottom note pulls that abstraction back into an embodied scene of diving into the sea and becoming scared.
A companion 'Top of The line' that prizes distance over closeness: speaking 'highly of one another / Through the strange distance / Is in some way better than love', a 'seperation / That ... / Few have ever known', undercut by a handwritten descent, 'When I dove into / the middle of the / sea I got scared'. This reading remains provisional because the page transcript is partial/OCR-uncertain.