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'She Ran' sets a woman running and an aging speaker falling down against night, starslost, and a warning to life itself.

The page carries a tender exhaustion. Brown skin, night, and vanished sunlight make the scene intimate, while the closing warning gives the whole thing the feeling of a bruised love lyric.

A distilled coda to the 'Also Ran' / barroom sequence, titled 'She Ran.' It keeps only the bones - the typo-scarred 'Me, old and f-lling down' against 'Her, the finest of brown' - then darkens into permanent night: 'No way to see the Sun / Where we were always is night.' The penultimate image places loss at the threshold of Eden, 'We do not come home and glance / at starslost before a garden' (source compound starslost kept verbatim). The bruised lyric ends on a two-word warning addressed to existence itself, 'Life, be careful.' - the period included, turning the whole sequence's reckless desire into a quiet caution.