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By Jack Joseph Smith

Penny Love Steven Friend Where earth and Sky seperate and make art Fighting is a gift, beat to death, snap your fingers, and then quick, you can fight The language of art you taught me so well Never drawing a picture I can realize a gallery Trouble so close to my soul, yet sight so good I see how you watched out for others, so many hapless and those with promise you took in, put up, and showed direction, really countless your good works,, since meeting you in early sixty seven in the hills of Echo Park, Silver Lake, up to the mid seventies on the Mc Kenzie grateful river home; all time knowing nothing is better, walking after war or during romantic film toward a kiss, or even maybe shattered with buckskin on on a lance Thanks

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GPT

This draft of 'Penny Love Steven Friend' links art, fighting, care, Echo Park, Silver Lake, the McKenzie River, and romance into a long tribute to formative friends.

With the OCR damage removed, the page reads less like fragments and more like a sustained thank-you. The handwritten CAN REALIZE intensifies the poem's claim that friendship and artistic seeing are bound together.

Claude

An expanded draft of the thank-you, retitled 'Penny Love Steven Friend,' that binds friendship to an aesthetics. It opens cosmologically - 'Where earth and Sky seperate and make art' (source spelling) - then makes a paradox of combat and craft: 'Fighting is a gift, beat to death, snap / your fingers, and then quick, you can fight / The language of art you taught me so well.' The handwritten 'CAN REALIZE' sharpens the next claim, 'Never drawing a picture I can realize a gallery,' as if seeing replaces making. The prose-like tribute then recounts their sheltering of 'so many / hapless and those with promise,' the geography widening from 'Echo Park, Silver / Lake' to the 'Mc Kenzie / grateful river home,' closing on 'walking after war or during romantic / film toward a kiss, or even maybe shattered / with buckskin on on a lance' and a bare 'Thanks.' This reading stays grounded in the verified typed body; the large marginal handwriting ('YOU MADE AND THE LIES') was documented in metadata, not integrated.