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By Jack Joseph Smith

Last Chance Get to slide the shaft Talking deep is good I did not say yes Big paycheck every two weeks Thirty four and no work South Western Pennsylvania Eastern West Virginia The medows from Green to Fairmont county Back in the day when if your no damn good you don't go into the mine's A ridge slide I saw rge slid I saw the rail Do you want to go And I said no

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This 'Last Chance' draft ties mining work, regional geography, the ridge, the rail, and a final refusal together with handwritten pressure about sliding the shaft and talking deep.

The cleaned text makes the page read as a labor-memory draft rather than OCR wreckage. The refusal matters because the poem keeps circling the mine as both work and fate.

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'Last Chance' is a coal-country refusal poem. The offer -- 'Get to slide the shaft,' 'Big paycheck every two weeks' -- meets a man 'Thirty four and no work' in 'South Western Pennsylvania / Eastern West Virginia,' 'The medows from Green / to Fairmont county.' It inverts the local code -- 'Back in the day when if / your no damn good / you don't go into the mine's' -- so the mine is fate, not failure. The speaker watches 'A ridge slide,' sees 'the rail,' and when asked 'Do you want to go,' answers 'And I said no.' Some right-side handwriting is unresolved.