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By Jack Joseph Smith

Last Chance Get to slide the shaft Talking deep is good I did not say yes Big paycheck every two weeks The shank and the draw ran all the way back to the ground I did not skip shit I just lied about thirty four from California I di not see two hundred and fifty men eating good to go to hell And down over the last Pennsylvania ridge it wasn't even black anymore Just those silver streaks you knew were a wedding lie

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This 'Last Chance' page turns from shaft and paycheck to the shank, the draw, a lie about being thirty four, men eating good to go to hell, and silver streaks that become a wedding lie.

The corrected text sharpens the moral landscape. Coal-country memory becomes a scene of self-invention, labor, and false brightness rather than simple nostalgia.

Claude

''''Last Chance' third pass -- 'the shank and the draw ran all the way back to the ground.' Two hundred and fifty men 'eating good to go to hell.' The silver streaks at the ridgeline read as 'a wedding lie.''''