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Woking For Molly turns the sky into multiplied suns, a rainbow around the `momon`, and lowered rigels that know the speaker is `coocool`.

The source spellings make the cosmic image stranger and more playful. The separate `across the` insertion leaves the opening line visibly revised rather than smoothed into ordinary syntax.

''''Woking For Molly' -- four suns across the sky, rainbow around the moon, a circle of angels lowered 'because they knew I was cooool.' Six-line cosmic self-regard.'''