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Woking For Molly turns the sky into multiplied suns, a rainbow around the `momon`, and lowered rigels that know the speaker is `coocool`.

The source spellings make the cosmic image stranger and more playful. The separate `across the` insertion leaves the opening line visibly revised rather than smoothed into ordinary syntax.

'Woking For Molly' is a short, playful brag built from a strange sky. The speaker claims 'I saw four suns acrps sky,' 'a rainbow around the momon,' and 'a circle of rigels / lowered because they knew I was / coocool.' The source spellings ('acrps,' 'momon,' 'coocool') and the dangling typed insertion 'across the' leave the cosmic self-regard visibly unsmoothed and stranger for it.