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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
Thee Flat turns making a piece into unpaid wonder, living hell, low life-sense, a fainting motion across the wall, and the study of good.
The page feels deliberately deflated. It resists uplift in both spelling and direction: `don't look up` is malformed on the page, and the poem chooses down as the better way to study good.
'Thee Flat' is a deliberately deflated poem about making that resists uplift in both spelling and direction. Craft is unpayable: 'You work on a piece / And then you set it,' yet 'You have n ot paid / for any of it's wonders,' and 'It is a living hell.' A 'fainting' moves 'across the walll,' another dream comes, and the closing logic chooses descent - 'The sence of life / is low, don''look up / Down is bette r / The study of good.'