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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This road-and-tree page treats courage, priceless people, and America as things one must earn through movement and attention rather than inherit.
The handwritten THEY / WERE / THERE makes the remembered presence more explicit. The speaker keeps returning to the same ethic: the right to sing comes after the road, not before it.
A road-poem about presence and earned vision. The speaker has 'never seen priceless things / and priceless people happen before', and the handwritten margin shout 'THEY / WERE / THERE' breaks into the typed line to insist on the reality of that witnessed moment - the turn coming when 'I saw her standing against the tree'. He guards his attention - 'I am making / sure that I don't miss anything' - and admits 'it / is not easy not changing', noting how 'somehow courage has one like their / surroundings'. The ethic lands in the close: leaving might be wiser, 'but / on the road in America, nothing is / better than that', because the road is how you 'earn / the right to sing a song'.