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By Jack Joseph Smith

Slighted Didn't she wish, an upgrade of thought I didn't think she cared, she cared less Back and forth on the avenue, crossing we could not get a place They were looking for her,.I was just alone on the court, the wire, and I refused to look out my window I mean I saw sun light through a drop cloth She was on the balcony, wished away, falling dead as a door nail Their you have it, what color am I I paint my room whatever color I can get I don't know what to say about painting a picture

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This first 'Slighted' page turns balcony, avenue, wire, drop cloth light, falling, paint, and color into a tense scene of emotional distance and failed representation.

The page is really about the limits of both seeing and painting another person. It is about color, but also about why color fails.

Claude

The first 'Slighted' sets emotional distance against the failure of representation. The woman 'didn't think she cared, she cared less', and the lovers move 'Back and forth on the avenue, crossing' but 'could not get a place'. The speaker is shut in and watchful - 'alone on the court, the wire', refusing 'to look out my window', seeing only 'sun light through / a drop cloth' - while she is 'on the balcony, wished / away, falling dead as a door nail'. The poem ends on the painter's bafflement and poverty of means: 'what color am I / I paint my room whatever color I / can get', and the flat surrender 'I don't know what to say about / painting a picture' - color, and selfhood, available only in whatever's on hand.