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By Jack Joseph Smith

oh so what Take a look Suicide is a youngster Hemingway and London Were the best white men you can get; sissies, cause there is nothing wrong with going to Hell first. that would be here I guess Oh yeah,. of course, Those two writers I mentioned, The white ones, one forty and the other seventy I think Older, so mostly dummer than you

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This page sneers at literary heroics and suicide-romance, dragging famous writers down into an earthly hell.

Its rough talk is purposeful. By mocking Hemingway and London while calling this world Hell first, the poem rejects grand tragic posturing and treats despair as already embedded in ordinary life.


Claude

A jeering takedown of literary suicide-machismo that opens with a shrug - 'oh so what / Take a look / Suicide is a youngster'. Hemingway and London, named as 'the best white men / you can get', are demoted to 'sissies', because by the speaker's logic 'there is nothing / wrong with going to Hell / first. that would be here / I guess' - this world already being the hell they fled. The mock-precise ages ('one forty and / the other seventy I think') feed the closing insult, 'Older, so mostly dummer / than you', which deflates the tragic-genius pose into mere old foolishness and refuses to romanticize their deaths.