Page 433

By Jack Joseph Smith

Alone There you have it; the word right out Sitting, looking at paper, while you can't play a gutar, can't read music, and can't carry a tune, for more than ten seconds, that is,. someone else can think it, I can too; hey cowboy, and cowgirl too, work'in hard when you are young will make you good looking, when, of if you get old, there are chances that it might make you more worn than usual, and I can not touch a piano either; as words go through your head while rhyme and in time mean things that you don't look up,, roll over and work; maybe when your singing to yourself, truth and true, are different than when your singing to someone else

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This fuller 'Alone' page keeps the theme of musical limitation but ties song to work, aging, and the difference between singing to yourself and singing to someone else.

Its best move is shifting from craft failure to honesty. The cleaned transcript clarifies the speaker's cowboy-and-cowgirl aside and the distinction between private and addressed song, making truth a test of relation rather than technique.

Claude

A fuller, prose-dense 'Alone' that keeps the disclaimer of musical limitation - 'can't play a gutar, can't read music, / and can't carry a tune, for more than / ten seconds' - but widens into address and aging. The cowboy aside turns folk-wisdom rueful: 'work'in hard when you are young will / make you good looking', but in age 'it might make / you more worn than usual'. Words still arrive on their own - 'rhyme and in time mean things that you / don't look up' - and the page lands on its sharpest distinction, that private and public song are not the same: 'maybe when / your singing to yourself, truth and true, are / different than when your singing to someone / else' - honesty reframed as a function of audience rather than technique.