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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This page speaks in the voice of a born fighter who rejects war while resisting the fear and passivity of the so-called quiet life.
The body is described as weapon-like, but the poem does not glorify organized violence. The handwritten 'go blind' sharpens the quiet-life passage, making the aftermath of conflict feel like refusal, exhaustion, and diminished sight.
Spoken in the voice of a born fighter who refuses organized war: 'My forearm is a club, not for / war, I was born thar way' (the source's 'thar' kept). He dares the listener to 'make your decisions / concerning my fate' and measures himself against a first kill - 'the first rabbitt / I killed isn't better thar you'. The page rejects the safe 'quiet life' as fear and, via the handwritten substitution, claims even the warrior knows 'how / to go blind'; it closes where struggle empties out - 'even those / who have never left, stopping / turns into a dream.'