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By Jack Joseph Smith

On The Rim Watch yourself Your out on your knees Your hands are lost Your belly is your only power and searching is not an option Block and tackle The pully then the pully then the pully Way back the twine; now the cable,; the rope for you; the slightly up, the dip The leverage of the third hand of the weight So you do not leave anything go Even an upside down cross, is not good For what you must not let slip through your hands now

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On The Rim turns physical leverage, ropes, pullys, and grip into a spiritual and moral warning about not letting anything essential slip away.

What works well is the fusion of labor and symbol. Even the upside-down cross enters as part of a practical lesson about holding on under strain.


Claude

On The Rim. Hands lost, belly the only power, searching no longer an option. Block and tackle, pulley pulley pulley. Even an upside down cross is not good for what you must not let slip through your hands now.