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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The titled page moves from a body strapped with stoves and guns into a threatened cabin full of garlic, heat, food preparation, and sudden fear.
Domestic shelter and siege logic occupy the same space. The corrected transcript makes the cabin more bodily and practical: food, dough, tortilla, heat, and fear all sit beside the armed standoff outside.
Four - stoves strapped to his front over heart and solar plexus, two guns firing at the police below his station against the rocks, limbs riddled with holes yet alive through most of the afternoon (relates to starving). Wild vision of a cold-faced man entering the cabin under the silver light-beam sword of love hollow. High-ceilinged cabin, herbs of garlic and blue-lite on the shelves, hot wood-stoves. Porch creak, peeks through a thin crack, sees a figure.