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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The page gathers a Watts Tower notebook fragment, where junkyard sculpture, Los Angeles, hospital air, cigarette smoke, oxygen, and the body meet in a blunt urban scene.
It reads like a draft surface rather than a polished poem. The lower Dick Gregory and schedule notes reinforce the notebook quality, while the main fragment makes sculpture, city life, and bodily cost share the same space.
A loose notebook surface, more draft than poem. It opens on an art-from-refuse hope - 'Hopefully the junkyard will produce / A Sculpture. / Watts Tower / Los Angeles, Pris-um' - then a city-body scene: 'Waiting out of The Building For Fresh Air,' cigarette smoke and 'My breath Against the wall' as 'A man in robes passes / Pushing oxygen on a cart' and says 'This is the price you pay / for it.' The page trails into bare notebook marginalia - 'Dick Gregory. / 687-3654' and 'RAPE / 9:00 Thurs Eve' - reinforcing the working-draft texture. This reading is provisional because the page transcript sits in the 'mixed' OCR quality band.