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By Jack Joseph Smith

During, a mid June afternoon in the year nineteen sixty six, a twenty-five year old Stavrogin Bash rubbed the dead nerve ending scars across his fore- head while getting out of a spanking new purple Mus- tang heading south along the Old Pacific Coast High- way up from the far beach end of the Santa Monica Freeway, and to a diametrically, sensitively quiet, yet high strung teen aged blond girl looking to be just old enough for a driver's licence, said, "thanks for the ride."

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The page opens like a film entrance, placing Stavrogin on the California coast in June 1966 as a hitchhiker dropped into the next stage of his life.

Purple Mustang, Jo Hope, the old coast highway, and the girl's taut quietness all help the page announce its own cinematic method. It is less interested in plot than in charged arrival, in the feeling that a person has stepped into a story already humming around him.

Claude

Classic opening-of-story beat: mid June 1966, 25-year-old Stavrogin Bash gets out of a spanking new purple Mustang south of the Santa Monica Freeway beach end and thanks the high-strung blond teen driver. Short scene-setting page essentially the book's intended first paragraph.