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By Jack Joseph Smith

Sketch ANIMAL THE III not major - WAIMAH CANYON flight Transportation FIRST SECTION I SLEEPING BEAUTY -- spring II BLOWN OUT BLACK SHEEP -- spring III TECHNOLOGICAL RESURRECTION - spring IV FOUR CHARACTERS IN SEARCH OF AN ANIMAL - summer SECOND SECTION V THE PARLOR TO THE BOAT HOUSE -- summer VI COLONEL MAKES HIS BID - fall-winter cross-over VII PRANKSTER MAKES HIS PLEA - fall-winter VIII THE COURTSHIP OF JAUQUELINE AT JIVEN JOE'S witchcraft. ship - Alone THIRD SECTION Summer IX THE LAST FESTIVAL OF MUSCLE BEACH The Construction of Trash Hauling Spring XI RUN OF ENDING DREAM XII The Dance of The Motion Picture Animal gets off work, goes to O'Anthony's for pay, and on his way from there to the Boat House is the death of Prankster in the desert of outer valley lights Decides against a drink and goes under the pier to the site of Prankster's old quarters, where he begins his own - cut to men in Boat House. Discussion of Blankname's "sister" leads to discussion of Animal - cut to the new watching him running north. The Thrill of the Dance and After

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A scan-verified sketch outline arranges Animal the III into seasonal sections while handwritten notes add travel, witchcraft, death, the Boat House, Prankster's old quarters, and the final movement toward dance.

The page is both table of contents and drafting map. The handwritten additions show the outline changing in place: canceled typed titles give way to motion-picture and dance language, and the bottom paragraph turns the structural list into a concrete sequence of action.

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'Sketch / ANIMAL THE III' — the seasonal/structural outline in three sections: Sleeping Beauty, Blown Out Black Sheep, Technological Resurrection, Four Characters in Search of an Animal (spring/summer); The Parlor to the Boat House, Colonel Makes His Bid, Prankster Makes His Plea, The Courtship of Jauqueline at Jiven Joe's (summer into fall-winter cross-over); The Last Festival of Muscle Beach, Run of Ending Dream, and XII The Thrill of the Dance and After. Chapters here carry season labels, as if the whole draft is being organized by weather.