Loyalty To The Nail

By Jack Joseph Smith

Up went the rusty nail through the wild wheat field And from a magic carpet kid I went like a folded short-shot young buck to the stubbles among growing ground . It wasn't thick like pain under that wind moving the kernels across Metes's Farm It was thick rather like having to stop on your way through a dream I bent up close to my tennis shoe and pulled the board from my sponge foot The nail was shanty door old and the blood was going into the rust Like other blood against the past of its place between walls I was childless enough to murmur (seeped to its mark from chicken or cattle) Soon I popped the rubber from my heel And like the waste of a used=up cellar rag eeeslipped off the sock The wound in the airoes Then closed in a puff to a blur Not too long after I'd taken a suck at the puncture to some small avail When I found myself licking the nail I don't know if I wanted that bit of blood for luck or to live out the ambition of telling a told story for the first time for me with something on my tongue But when I got back to my suburban home; I told them it happened on a construction sight Because I thought you had to give nails up like dogs for testing

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A boyhood memory of stepping on a rusty nail in a wheat field becomes a meditation on blood, storytelling, and the strange loyalty of licking the wound's source, ending with the child's lie about where the injury happened.

The poem transforms a minor childhood accident into a parable about the origins of narrative instinct, where pain, rust, and blood become the first material a storyteller puts on his tongue.

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A boyhood narrative of stepping on 'the rusty nail through the wild wheat field' on 'Metes's Farm,' where the puncture feels less like pain than 'having to stop / on your way through a dream.' The nail is 'shanty door old' and 'the blood was going into / the rust,' and after sucking the wound the boy finds himself 'licking the nail,' unsure if he wanted 'that bit of blood for luck / or to live out the ambition of telling a told story / for the first time for me with something on my tongue.' That second possibility is the poem's covert ars poetica - story made yours only once it is literally on the tongue - and the closing lie, that 'it happened on a construction sight' because 'you had to give nails / up like dogs for testing,' shows the child already shaping narrative to keep the true wound from inspection.

The poem withholds metaphor as a discipline. Every image - the 'magic carpet kid,' the 'sponge foot,' the board pulled from the 'tennis shoe,' the blood seeping 'to its mark' like the prior blood 'from chicken or cattle' - stays stubbornly physical, so that when the figurative reading finally surfaces it has the taste of rust behind it. The title's 'loyalty' is to the thing that wounded, not to the suburban home that demands an acceptable account of the wound; the gap between the licked nail and the construction-site story is the gap between experience and the version we hand the family.