Loyalty To The Nail

By Jack Joseph Smith

Up went the rusty nail through the wild wheat field And from a magic carpet kid I went like a folded short-shot young buck to the stubbles among growing ground . It wasn't thick like pain under that wind moving the kernels across Metes's Farm It was thick rather like having to stop on your way through a dream I bent up close to my tennis shoe and pulled the board from my sponge foot The nail was shanty door old and the blood was going into the rust Like other blood against the past of its place between walls I was childless enough to murmur (seeped to its mark from chicken or cattle) Soon I popped the rubber from my heel And like the waste of a used=up cellar rag eeeslipped off the sock The wound in the airoes Then closed in a puff to a blur Not too long after I'd taken a suck at the puncture to some small avail When I found myself licking the nail I don't know if I wanted that bit of blood for luck or to live out the ambition of telling a told story for the first time for me with something on my tongue But when I got back to my suburban home; I told them it happened on a construction sight Because I thought you had to give nails up like dogs for testing

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A boyhood memory of stepping on a rusty nail in a wheat field becomes a meditation on blood, storytelling, and the strange loyalty of licking the wound's source, ending with the child's lie about where the injury happened.

The poem transforms a minor childhood accident into a parable about the origins of narrative instinct, where pain, rust, and blood become the first material a storyteller puts on his tongue.

Claude

The poem's central mystery — why did the boy lick the nail? — is answered only with two competing possibilities: luck, or 'the ambition of telling a told story for the first time for me with something on my tongue.' That second option is a theory of poetry itself: you need the taste of rust and blood to make the story yours. The loyalty of the title is not to pain but to the object that caused it — and the final lie, telling them it happened on a construction site 'because I thought you had to give nails up like dogs for testing,' reveals that the boy already understood narrative as an act of protection, shielding the real wound from institutional inspection.

The wheat field, the tennis shoe, the sponge foot, the shanty door nail — every detail insists on the physical world's priority over any meaning imposed on it. The poem earns its metaphor by refusing to reach for one until the blood is already on the tongue.