The Blasted Blast
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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A narrative ballad about old man Fletcher, a Missouri sawmill operator who confronts a neighbor driving cattle through his gate, and in a frontier standoff kills the man with a shotgun blast — then spends the rest of his life unable to sleep without dreaming of it.
The poem treats rural violence as both legend and psychological ruin, moving from folksy humor through Western showdown to the permanent stain of killing, sealed in the image of 'a pretty velvet dream gone too deep.'
The poem tells a killing story in the voice of a tall tale — meats, potatoes, corn whiskey, a 'firey five-and-one-half foot frame' — but the narrative engine is the brother's grin, which knows exactly what it is setting in motion. Fletcher lowers his gun on 'pioneer pride' and the other man moves, and the head is 'suddenly gone.' The frontier code acquits Fletcher — 'property-right plainsmen law / would turn Fletcher loose' — but the final lines deliver the sentence no court imposed: he will never again sleep without 'that kind of tint / on a pretty velvet dream gone too deep.' The blast at the gate seals blood in iron fate, but it unseals something in Fletcher that cannot be closed.