The Star

By Jack Joseph Smith

She was one of your friends She crossed the line, but never came back Tumed into a colossus; she lost demention, never accomplishing what she dined on, those Pyramid's that refuse to sink During her act, each agent and do-gooder, had a better play for her However, the real and mexaggerated problem was, that power changes its dominion But growing up by chance, didn't happen to go along, with every scene and style she caught, im her extended children's theatre rehearsalseee

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A portrait of a woman whose ambition and fame outpaced her self-knowledge, where crossing the line into stardom meant losing dimension while agents and do-gooders competed to reshape her.


Claude

A portrait of fame as disappearance, addressed almost as gossip - 'She was one of your friends.' She 'crossed the line, / but never came back,' 'Turned into a colossus,' and so 'lost demention,' growing monumental and hollow at once, 'never accomplishing what she dined on, / those Pyramid's that refuse to sink.' The poem locates the damage in the apparatus around her: 'each agent and do-gooder / had a better play for her,' and 'the real and unexaggerated problem was, / that power changes its dominion.' Its quiet verdict is developmental - 'growing up by chance / didn't happen to go along / with every scene and style she caught' - so that all her acquired power was still being performed 'in her extended children's theatre rehearsals,' a grown star arrested inside a child's unending rehearsal she never got to leave.