By Jack Joseph Smith
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This later "Uno Mas" turns wind, sky-knife, moon juggling, insolence, killing, and studdering into a vision of purity that comes only when no one bothers to care.
The poem sounds deliberately inattentive to detail, but that neglect becomes part of its moral atmosphere rather than a failure of focus. Life and death are treated as spectacle and rhythm at once, especially once killing and studdering are made strangely equivalent. The ending is chilling because it ties childhood purity to indifference instead of innocence.
This later 'Uno Mas' reworks the recurring wind-and-knife vision toward something darker: 'She was in the wind / He had a knife in the sky', and 'Life and death was such a wonder / Juggling balls and the full Moon.' The unsettling equation arrives mid-poem - 'Many times killinf / and studdering / are the same thing' - flattening violence and speech-failure into one. It closes on the collection's chilling refrain about indifference: 'Children have no sin / How pure it is when you don't care', tying innocence to not caring rather than to goodness.