Page 136
By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This second "Before The Top" page narrows the Seattle memory into a dawn scene with Gibbons under the highwire, while the handwritten notes pull the memory toward circus edge, wooden structure, and approaching spectacle.
What was scenic on the previous page becomes tactile here: clamps, cord, shine, and the precise labor of preparing danger. Gibbons is no longer just companion or witness; he is the figure literally beneath the spectacle, making it possible. The right-margin note gives the page another physical edge around Queen Ann Hill, huge wood, and the circus setting.
A second 'Before The Top' page makes the Seattle dawn tactile: the same drunken grandstand memory 'from the docks to Queen Ann / Hill' narrows to Gibbons 'Up in the first shine,' 'underneath' the highwire, 'Tightening the clamps' with 'Two hands around the wind / and the wind of the cord.' Gibbons shifts from companion to the figure literally beneath the spectacle, making the danger possible; the handwritten margin fragments 'And over that / Edge / Huge wooden / fit' add a rougher physical edge, and this reading stays partly provisional because the page is OCR-mixed with placed marginal handwriting.