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This page reads like a rough handwritten roll call, naming people and ending in a terse numerical or classificatory phrase.

Because it is mostly a list, its meaning is social rather than lyrical. The names matter as a small circle of persons held together on the page, and the final "Five for Seven" gives the note the feel of a designation, grouping, or code rather than a finished poem.

A short roll call, mostly proper names (Dick Laiowne, George Sarki, Chuck Hergy), closing 'Five for Seven.' Reads as an ad-hoc dedication or team list rather than a finished poem.