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By Jack Joseph Smith

Dylan What ya' gonna do; if I could play a guitar,. on top of poetry,. then, everyone would be leaving the hotel I beat the shit out of a convict At a place intime; cause I heard he was threating my kid, and by the time the cops came, I was at my potato factory drafting table,. solid oak with a perfect slant; when the police do COME on through the log cabin door, all along the sandstone fireplace, where from looking OVER BACK directly dark ivy or low window glass, leaded old and purple in those silent nights, turning I said, "hey guys, listen to this line," where abruptly, I'd say five, turned around and left.

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Dylan turns poetry into a confrontational performance: guitar over verse, violence against a convict, police entering a log cabin, and finally a spoken line that sends the men away.

The page presents poetry as something with room-clearing force, halfway between music, threat, and courtroom testimony. Domestic detail matters because the oak drafting table, sandstone fireplace, and purple leaded glass give the speaker's violence a made environment rather than an abstract stage. The ending imagines the spoken line itself as the thing that makes authority turn around and leave.

Claude

'Dylan' imagines poetry as a force powerful enough to empty a room: 'if I could play / a guitar,. on top of poetry,. then, / everyone would be leaving the hotel.' A boastful, violent anecdote follows, beating 'the shit out of a convict' for 'threating my kid,' set against a richly furnished domestic scene: a 'potato / factory drafting table,. solid oak with / a perfect slant,' a 'log cabin door,' a 'sandstone fireplace,' and 'dark ivy or low window glass, / leaded old and purple in those silent nights.' When the police 'do COME,' the speaker turns the moment into performance, saying 'hey guys, listen to this / line,' and the men leave as if the line itself were the real weapon.