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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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Dylan pares the anecdote down to a chant-like challenge, a guitar-and-poetry wish, the convict story, and a handwritten ending where the men turn around and leave.
The large handwritten opening gives the page the feel of a performed refrain before the typed narrative begins. Solid oak and perfect slant keep the drafting table central, as though composition is the source of the speaker's authority. The closing handwritten line turns the police scene into a punchline of poetic command: after hearing the line, they simply turn around and leave.
The most pared-down 'Dylan,' broken into short, chant-like lines under the handwritten shout 'WHATTA YA GONNA DO.' The wish - 'If I could play a gutar / on top of the poetry / Then everybody / would be leaving the hotel' - precedes the brag of beating 'this convict' who 'was threatening my kid,' the police arriving 'through the log cabin door' while he sits at 'my potato factory / drafting table, / solid oak with a perfect slant.' The handwritten close lands the punchline: he says 'Hey guys listen to this line' and 'They turned Around And Left,' the spoken line emptying the room.