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By Jack Joseph Smith

Correction The warrior begins, long before the soldier The warrior begins before swimming The warrior begins before the bicycle The warrior knows, before the warrior can walk A warrior may choose, an entire life; even as there, and when the making of the matter comes close, without killing anyone And A soldier NEEDs to be A WArrior A WArrior dosen't HAVE to be ANYbody

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GPT

Correction argues that the warrior begins before soldiering, skill, or even walking, and that real strength can remain nonviolent and socially unassigned.

The poem separates warriorhood from militarism. Knowing begins before technique, and the crucial ethical claim is that one may choose an entire life without killing anyone. The handwritten close pushes the distinction harder: the soldier needs the warrior, but the warrior does not need a role or identity handed to him.

Claude

'Correction' separates warriorhood from militarism: 'The warrior begins, / long before the soldier', before swimming, the bicycle, even walking. The ethical core is that 'A warrior may choose, / an entire life... / without killing anyone'. The handwritten coda drives the inversion home -- 'A soldier / NEEDs to be / A WArrior', but 'A WArrior / dosen't HAVE / to be ANYbody' -- making identity optional while stance is not.