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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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Earth, water, and fire are treated as one real order where leaving vanishes, colorless sight closes distance, and a child with a bucket hears weather promise relief.
The refusal of pretending makes the poem sound almost corrective, stripping away social scenery like mansion and alley. Thoughts at a distance and thoughts directly before you are finally said to be the same, which collapses spiritual scale into ordinary perception. The child who cannot cry but still carries the bucket gives the closing weather promise a hard-earned tenderness.
No coming and going, therefore no leaving. Whether shining it on in a mansion or looking away in an alley, 'the one without a color sees.' Thought with distance and thought right in front of you are the same; a child unable to cry carries the bucket in the air.