By Jack Joseph Smith
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"Dave" captures a moment of delighted recognition in Liza's cottage, where age, ease, and intimacy make damnation seem irrelevant.
The poem is small and conversational, but the happiness in it is unusually unguarded. Liza's lack of astonishment helps set the scene as one of belonging rather than spectacle, as if the speaker has stepped into a social world already secure in itself. The handwritten corrections sharpen the card-playing idiom and the address to 'you,' making 'There is no Hell' sound less like theology than a verdict on the sufficiency of human company.
'Dave' is a small, unguarded scene of recognition: 'When I went into Liza's cottage / And sat down and talked to you / I was so happy,' the addressee's 'eyes pissed and shining.' Liza, watching, is 'Not astonished at all' and 'can play Two of a kind.' The closing turns theology into a verdict on good company - 'There is no Hell for you / and liza / It is just the top of the line' - happiness measured by belonging rather than damnation.