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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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Fire, stars, sticks, and seven novelists turn perception into a threat display, as the speaker challenges an unnamed rival to fight a war in words.
The opening insists that vision depends on what has been missed: fire appears only after the wind was ignored, and the star first shines when the moon is gone. Staring at one thing for too long becomes its own form of blindness, until the poem suddenly hardens into menace with the stick and the promise to break someone. Counting seven seas and seven novelists turns literary knowledge into a weapon, not a refuge.
You see the fire when you haven't watched the wind; the first time you see a star shine is when the moon has gone away. Threat to anyone who wants 'a war with words': 'Add up in your head the seven / novelists I know, / and I will break you.'