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By Jack Joseph Smith

| Z=aientt tha I didn*t thinkof it until later on Phings to talk about whan we are gone Sorrow and sin and the less of us For a moment let the good times go And think about how hard it really was If you are given a gift Then the gift turns on you . Then what do you do? Three loves you wont let go The way of war that wont let you alone It is all silene I did not think a thoughtful thing , on top a mountain top

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AI Interpretation

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Later reflection turns gift against giver, keeps three loves and war in the same silence, and admits that no useful thought came on the mountain.

The poem looks backward from afterlife talk toward the moment when good times had to be suspended and difficulty finally faced. A gift that turns on its receiver makes blessing feel unstable, almost predatory. "Three loves" and "the way of war" stand beside each other without reconciliation, and the mountain top offers no revelation, only blankness.


Claude

'I didn't think of it until later on': things to talk about when we are gone — sorrow, sin, loss of us; a gift that turns on you; three loves you won't let go; the way of war that won't let you alone. 'It is all silence.'