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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
This second "Liza" keeps the inward library but shifts toward message, warning, slowness, and a marginal meditation on reference, self-expression, and the greptist wanderer.
The voice is more fragmentary here, yet its aim is clearer: to turn interior knowledge into an address for others. Love enters directly, and the typed poem feels like a note being composed in real time, full of affection and interruption. The marginal handwriting expands the earlier idea of reference into a rough spiritual warning about seeing, expression, and some bearded mammal figure at the edge of the page.
Liza rewrite: the books-in-head line recurs, affection for Jesus as the greptist giving him a push. Handwritten marginalia runs heavy on this page.