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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
A handwritten outburst and lost dial open a half-broken prayer from a misplaced radio, leading through sea, highway, Methodist fatherhood, shattered return, and Satan in the Sun.
The page feels like a station caught between signal and static, which suits its spiritual uncertainty. The handwritten 'I turned / lost the dial' makes the radio image feel literal and compositional at once, as if the poem begins in a failed tuning. The father's warning that "twice is when / you don't come back" gives the speaker a family proverb about risk, while glass on the Moor and Satan in the Sun make the whole landscape feel contaminated.
Oh shit, the Methodist father line about twiee is when you dor''t come back, glass on the Moon, Satan seen more than once in the Sun. First run.