By Jack Joseph Smith
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Watch Out turns flirtation in the dark into a playful but destabilizing encounter with gender inversion, alley movement, and farmboy shock.
The page treats identity as something performed, reversed, and spun through motion rather than fixed in place. Its energy comes from consent and surprise at once: the speaker goes along willingly, then finds himself unsettled by how thoroughly the encounter rearranges expectation. The result is more vivid than moralizing.
'Watch Out' stages a consenting flirtation across gender as choreography. The speaker's refusal to refuse - 'Thee is no way that I am going to say no' - meets a partner who 'Is so ingageing so good' that the only answer is 'OK to go along.' What follows is all motion: 'two flirting / through the dark,' 'Not danceing to be safe,' 'A second in and out of / the alley,' 'a quarter spin.' The reversal lands in the diction itself - 'Then the he of she / And the other way arou d / Shucked me as a farmboy' - identity spun around until the speaker is outmaneuvered, husked like corn, the rural self-image undone by the city's fluency.