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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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An old poem from the Summit House kitchen table becomes a note of thanks to Barb, joining sadness, bad spelling, tolerance, clean-house wisdom, and a handwritten closing of friendship.
The tone is intimate and self-aware, especially in the admission that sadness is real but not the whole reflection. Mentioning terrible spelling without wanting to correct it preserves the rough truth of the moment rather than polishing it. Barb's laughter, Jack's line about money and cleanliness, and the added 'Your friend, Jack' keep the memory grounded in ordinary resilience.
A companion cover-note to Barb, dating the work and naming the writer. He recalls drafting 'probably one hundred / and fifty' poems 'at / your kitchen table' at the Summit House and encloses 'my favorate one,' qualifying it carefully: 'Sad, though sad / is not my over all relection.' The voice is disarmingly self-aware about its own roughness - 'My spelling is terible Barbara, / I don't want to look it up' - and frames the bundle as ongoing work he will send 'Month or two' later. It signs over from third person to first - 'Barb laughs. / Jack is saying; "you don't have to, have money / to have a clean house"' - a working-class aphorism standing in for the whole letter's dignity, closed simply 'Your friend, / Jack.'