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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
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"High Watch" turns a penny on the pavement into a test of worth, then widens into luck, pursuit, hunted escape, and a traveler's first glimpse of the sea.
Refusing to pick up the coin becomes a metaphysical offense, as though even tiny encounters with chance reveal how a person stands in the universe. The dark version of Earl Flim ties adventure and performance to being on the run, while the odd preserved spellings keep the page's rough source texture intact. The last movement toward sand, sea, and a shotgun makes the poem feel like a frontier parable about danger, appetite, and initiation.
'High Watch' makes a single refused penny on the pavement into a verdict on a person, claiming the 'idea of luck has diminished you' and even the universe's reckoning of your worth. The poem then opens outward into hunting, pursuit, and the instinct in 'dog, man and beast, that wats the chased to get away', closing on the grandfather's strange initiation, 'I did not even see sand before I saw the sea', before a traveler's shotgun comes out.