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By Jack Joseph Smith
By Jack Joseph Smith
Original Scan
AI Interpretation
The misplaced radio keeps singing while wind, sorrow, stars, sky, courthouse dread, and a final Prohibition annotation turn American life into a test of whether one can still orient oneself at all.
This version feels more stripped down and aphoristic, with the prayer set against a world where even God may be finished and the handwritten savage line complicates who is speaking. The line about waking from a dream and not finding the sky is the real crisis, because it imagines dislocation at the level of the cosmos. Walking into a courthouse on purpose becomes the poem's emblem for surrendering oneself to a hostile order, while the Prohibition addition pushes that order into explicitly legal and historical terms.
High Wateh refined: America has alot of songs, living savage, the wind can twist and say God is done. Closes with walking into a courthouse on purpose equals nothing to do.