Untitled ("Sometimes I is good")

By Jack Joseph Smith

Sometimes I is good To have forgotten What you wanted to say Choices never rhyme Wishing another way Has not to do with hate and sacrifice being the best part of youth Father's without feeling didn't express that There is no hurt No feeling really Leaving when your young Wildness knows there shouldn't be any cross about wood and stone

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AI Interpretation

GPT

A brief reflection on youth and emotional inheritance, stripped down until forgetfulness itself starts to sound like survival.


Claude

A short, spare poem on forgetting and emotional absence: 'Sometimes I is good / To have forgotten / What you wanted to say', it argues that 'Choices never rhyme' and that wishing otherwise 'Has not to do with / hate and sacrifice / being the best / part of youth'. It turns toward inheritance - 'Father's without feeling / didn't express that / There is no hurt / No feeling really' - and ends on a wild child's refusal of 'any cross about wood and stone'.

The poem's center is numbness passed down: 'Father's without feeling / didn't express that' produces a child who reports 'There is no hurt / No feeling really', so emotional silence becomes the family's only legible expression. The grammar of the first line is its own argument - 'Sometimes I is good' fuses the speaking 'I' with the predicate 'good' and reads as both broken syntax and dialect, making forgetting a condition of the self rather than a passing event. 'Choices never rhyme' is the governing claim: in a poem so attentive to sound, the refusal of rhyme stands for a life that will not resolve into matched, redemptive pairs. The closing 'Wildness knows there shouldn't be / any cross about wood and stone' rejects the imposed symbol - the cross built of timber and rock - in favor of an unconverted wildness, echoing the cross-and-stone refusals elsewhere in the book. Source spellings and the title's 'I is' are preserved as written.