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By Jack Joseph Smith

Nothing Done? Even as in the absence where we do not sleep, in peace of mind some do war In lucky such long life, we live out our death's; hopefully in touch, always with two sides that dream For human like wine, is not youth done... when it reaches good

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The poem links sleep, peace, war, aging, and wine into a brief meditation on how life carries death without being finished by it.

The title asks whether anything has actually been accomplished, and the poem answers through opposites held together: peace contains war, long life contains death, and human maturity is compared to wine becoming good. The phrase "hopefully in touch" gives the fragment a wishful balance rather than simple resignation. Its final thought is that youth is not merely over when ripeness arrives; something reaches value through time.


Claude

'Nothing Done?' is a short paradox-poem balancing peace against war and life against death, closing on the wine analogy: 'human like wine, / is not youth done... / when it reaches good'.

The poem works by holding opposites at once -- 'in peace of mind some do war,' and 'In lucky such long life, / we live out our death's,' so the long-lived rehearse their end in installments. 'Always with two sides that dream' names that doubleness directly. The wine figure lands as the resolution rather than the premise: ripening is not the cancellation of youth but its arrival at 'good.' The question-marked title keeps the whole consolation conditional, never quite asserting that anything was accomplished. Source spelling 'death's' is kept as written.