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By Jack Joseph Smith

IN A BREATH He on the great boom takes off Pounding is a remembering mind And it bravely moves out past that flash on the line of an illusion-reality drug RUN OFF RUNNING DEAR LIKE (Meadows and flowers) Sensing being laid over moist green Seen the universe and splendor spilling through an immediate find Color the vanquished whisper of Eden Shadows reach and light pin points its miracle with a praise And in shafts the heart is made of glory through the shifts in the white cloud sky Back dropped in the transparent slightness: the way camera-men like clouds to be Blue at the endless end of torrent in tunnel Transcending mountain pockets of circle rain Silence is the particle's breathing vibration as a planet spins and rips immagination's visitation into the high human Safes with the eleventh grade instruction of Einstein

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The poem chases a breathless burst of perception in which speed, landscape, cloudlight, film imagery, and cosmic thought collapse into one exultant motion.

Its language is jagged and overloaded, but that disorder feels deliberate because everything is happening at once: takeoff, pounding memory, meadows, Eden, camera light, tunnel, rain, particle breath, and Einstein. The speaker seems to want a state where sensation and imagination fuse before ordinary thought can slow them down. Even the strange phrasing helps the effect, making wonder feel unstable, half-visionary and half-technological.

Claude

'IN A BREATH' is a breathless visionary surge -- a figure who 'on the great boom takes off' along 'an illusion-reality drug' line -- that ends with cosmic 'visitation' landing back at 'the eleventh grade instruction of Einstein'.

The overloaded syntax enacts simultaneity: takeoff, 'a remembering mind,' meadows and flowers, 'the vanquished whisper of Eden,' all happening before ordinary thought can slow them. A cool cinematic aside frames the rapture as staged -- the clouds are blue 'the way camera-men like clouds to be' -- making the vision half-technological. The deflating close brings the planetary trip, where 'a planet spins and rips immagination's visitation / into the high human / Safes,' down to a high-school physics lesson, so exuberance arrives at deliberately modest vocabulary. Source spellings 'immagination' and 'Safes' are kept verbatim.